Curse

simple minded · Aug 02, 2006, 10:10 PM // 22:10

boredom struck me last night at about 1 am...so i decided, might as well draw...i only had a pen so i started going at it...tell me what you think

i need some helpful criticism...it just doesnt look humanlike or somethin... :\ dunno

IGN: Simple Minded

actionjack · Aug 02, 2006, 10:47 PM // 22:47

If I put my face close to the monitor.. I can smell the smell of ink....

Very good, you can even put it in the concept armor thread.

some sugestion.. try not to draw on the line paper next time.

Living Legend · Aug 02, 2006, 11:16 PM // 23:16

is it an armor thats already made or an armor you like to be put in?

simple minded · Aug 03, 2006, 09:24 PM // 21:24

oh, its not made...i just start drawing. i never really have an idea of what im going to be drawing b4 i do it, i just start. and it looks ALOT better in real life, when you see it up close its really sketchy...and about the lined paper: i was just drawing in a notebook (the first thing i found)

Calan The Powerful · Aug 03, 2006, 10:31 PM // 22:31

i think that you used to much black and didnt leave enough white so its hard for me to tell what everything is exactly

Rathcail · Aug 04, 2006, 01:10 AM // 01:10

Those spikey things on the armour makes the waist look extremely thin.

Storm Crow · Aug 04, 2006, 01:54 AM // 01:54

The design on the chest piece kinda looks like the FoW set..other than that similarity, it's awesome! Keep up the good work!

Artdeux · Aug 04, 2006, 02:41 AM // 02:41

Small Hands, short arms, and non-dynamic pose for the lose. >_O

The line shading on the armour doesn't look like shading, just random hair or scraches. Crosshatching it would be better.

I would highly suggest using a pencil for the skeleton and the armour sketch, then finish off with pen.

simple minded · Aug 04, 2006, 08:09 PM // 20:09

lol ty, and i usually use a pencil, but the pen was the first thing i drew...and about too much black, on the real paper it looks alot better, you can tell, but when its up close it just looks like a blob :\

and im not too good at poses, b/c it will seem to me like they are as proportionate...but im going to try a ranger down on one knee with a bow, aiming up or somethin...ill do it some night when i get bored

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*and whats crosshatching?

xiaotsu · Aug 04, 2006, 09:02 PM // 21:02

Quote:

Originally Posted by simple minded

lol ty, and i usually use a pencil, but the pen was the first thing i drew...and about too much black, on the real paper it looks alot better, you can tell, but when its up close it just looks like a blob :\

and im not too good at poses, b/c it will seem to me like they are as proportionate...but im going to try a ranger down on one knee with a bow, aiming up or somethin...ill do it some night when i get bored

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*and whats crosshatching?

Meaning #1: shading consisting of multiple crossing lines
Synonyms: hatch, hatching, hachure

Shadow Maruader · Aug 05, 2006, 11:36 PM // 23:36

Tell ya wat its a hell of alot better then what i can ever draw

skills4kills · Aug 08, 2006, 02:55 AM // 02:55

very nice

yeah the chest kinda seems like the Fow.. but I dono I havnet played GW in about uhh i think a few weeks, gettin factions soon ^_^ I passed summer school!!!! 96 in math and a 92 in english, so moms gettin me factions..
I know i know I have no idea how i passed english either, *LOOK ON PPL PAPER* erm i mean no no...

well keep up the good wokr use diff paper though

I wish i could post some o'mine dont gotta scanner

unholy guardian · Aug 08, 2006, 04:02 AM // 04:02

looks like metriod prime meets guild wars, it's pretty cool but a little too spikey if you ask me